You have just had a terrible trip to a foreign country. Post a message to an English online forum:1) telling other travelers some of your bad experiences;2) giving them some suggestions about taking a trip.You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your message.Use "Wang Lin" instead.

参考答案: Hello, everyone. I just came back from a seven-day trip to Paris. Al- though it is a beautiful city, the bad experiences happened there made me feel unhappy and depressed. During the first three days, I enjoyed the beautiful scenery in Paris. However, on the fourth day, when we were taking the subway, a black man suddenly rushed up to the girl sitting next to me, taking her phone and running away in the blink of an eye. It was said that Paris had bad public security. So, if you plan to visit Paris. Be aware of taking care of your valuables. And you'd better come there with your family or friends.


解题思路: 【写作点金】

此篇属应用文文体,是网络论坛发帖。首先应该注意格式,因为网络发帖为非正式文体,正常书写即可。其次注意时态,基本用一般过去时或现在完成时。最后,按题目要求从两个方面来写:你的不愉快旅行经历和一些旅行建议。语言要简洁、明了。

【高频词句】

rush up to 冲到跟前

run away 跑走,跑开

in the blink of all eye 眨眼间

It is/was said that 据说

Plan to do 计划做某事

be aware of 意识到,知道

had better d0最好做某时候

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